Manuscript &
Story Evaluations

Professional feedback tailored to your draft’s stage — from shaping ideas to refining a completed manuscript.

Grow your best book — no matter where you are in the writing journey.

Every story begins as a seed. Some are still tucked in the soil, waiting for the right spark to sprout. Others have started to grow, but need shaping and support to thrive. Wherever you are in your writing process, I’ll help you nurture your story from the first idea to the final bloom.

Where are you in your story’s growth?

Sprout Stage

You’re still developing your idea or working through an unfinished draft. This is the stage for clarifying your premise, shaping your plot, and exploring your characters so you can move confidently toward “The End.”

Growth Stage

You’ve finished a complete draft and are ready to revise and strengthen it. This stage focuses on refining structure, deepening characters, and elevating the story’s impact so it’s ready for the next phase of its journey.

Spout Stage

For early-stage writers developing the story’s foundation — premise, plot, and characters. This is where we ensure your story is built on solid, intentional ground.

Brainstorming Session

Work through story blocks or plot gaps in a focused, 60-minute call. Leave with fresh ideas and a clear next steps.

Plot Structure & Blueprint

Get a big-picture review of your outline, synopsis, or partial draft, plus a roadmap to finish with confidence.

First 50 Pages
Deep Dive

Catch structural, style, or character issues early with in-depth feedback and suggestions on your opening chapters. 

Progress Partner & & Writing Mentor

Stay motivated with regular check-ins, goal-setting, and gentle guidance to keep your draft moving forward.

Growth Stage

For writers with a completed draft ready for revision. This is where we refine structure, deepen characters, and strengthen the narrative so your story stands tall.

The Manuscript Blueprint

A high-level assessment highlighting strengths and 3–5 top priorities, along with clear next steps to guide your revision.

The Developmental Road Map

A deep-dive editorial report on structure all storytelling elments plus a step-by-step revision plan and a 60-minute follow-up call.

Scene & Structure Audit

Detailed chapter-by-chapter recommendations designed to spot weak scenes, plot holes, and pacing issues.

Character
Compass

Targeted feedback on your characters’ motivations, conflicts, and growth to ensure every arc is authentic and engaging.

Ready to Get Started?

Fill out the form below to request your chosen service. I’ll review your project details and be in touch within 2 business days with available start dates. Once we confirm the schedule, you’ll receive an invoice — for the full amount if your project begins within 14 days, or for a deposit if your start date is further out. Your booking is secured once payment is received.